Hi, I need help writing a paragraph about the management process of a chosen company (Amazon), analysing & researching issues from a management consultant’s perspective. It is quite easy but I’m having problem wording it.

Marking Criteria- Assessment 1b (20%)

CriteriaExcellent 85-100%Very Good 75-84%Good 65-74%Satisfactory 50-64%Unsatisfactory 0-49%  
Context and Summary of the Case (20%)Provides a detailed and succinct summary of the organisation and provides a clear context.The sources were utilised effectively to clarify the company’s situation.     Provides a detailed summary of the organisation and provides a clear context. Some of the presented information is not relevant to the situation. The online sources were utilised effectively to help support the presentation.    Provides a summary of the organisation and some context. The summary and the context were somewhat supported by the information.Provides a summary of the organisation and provides some context.  Some of the presented information is not relevant to the situation.Very little or no summary of the organisation and/or context
Identification of a management problem  (30%)Presents a management problem/issue evidently andprovides a clear discussionand justification strongly alignedwith a FOM.  Identifies and describes a management problem/ issue and provides a clearalignment with a FOM.   Identifies a management problem/ issueand presentsa FOM.   Identifies management problem/ issue but lacking a clear presentation of a FOM.  No identification of management problem/issue or FOM.
Paragraph structure (15%)Has a topic sentence, supporting details, and concluding remarks very clearly written.Has a topic sentence, supporting details, and concluding remarks, but they are a little vague.  One of the structural components is missing or cannot tell/unclear.Two of the structural components are missing or cannot tell/unclear.Lacking the correct structure of a paragraph.  
Resources (20%)Both two online articles are from reliable sources related to the organisation or management issues within the last 2 years. Both two academic articles are aligned withthe management issues and FOM identified and are from peer-reviewed journals published within the last 5 years.One source is questionable. E.g.One out of two online articles are from reliable sources related to the organisation or management issues within the last 2 years. OR one of the two academic articles are aligned with the management issues and FOM identified and are from peer-reviewed journals published within the last 5 years.Two sources are questionable. E.g.One out of two online articles are from reliable sources related to the organisation or management issues within the last 2 years. OR one of the two academic articles are aligned with the management issues and FOM identified and are from peer-reviewed journals published within the last 5 years.Two sources are questionable and dated. One out of two online articles are from reliable sources related to the organisation or management issues within the last 5 years. OR one of the two academic articles are aligned with the management issues and FOM identified and are from peer-reviewed journals published within the last 5-10 years.Less than half of the articles are alignedwith the management issues and FOM identified. ORboth web articles are not from reliable sources. OR both journal articles are not from peer-reviewed journals. OR articles are older than 10 years.
Communication and Reference Style (15%)Written expression is excellent. No errors with referencing.  Some minor errors/lack of clarity with written expression. Minor errors with formatting in reference list and/or in-text citations.Several errors with expression, including grammatical and spelling errors. Some lack of clarity. Several minor errors with the reference list or in-text citations.Numerous spelling/ grammatical errors. Lack of clarity. Several major errors with reference list and/or in-text citations.Ideas communicated poorly with extensive errors in expression. Lack of clarity. No reference list provided, or incorrect style. Or No citations in-text.

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